Here and There: Chapter Eight

So my goal is to get this bad boy all up and complete over the course of the next couple of days.  This chapter is the last of the already edited ones (although I had to do another pretty serious edit before it was ready to go up here), but I’m hoping for the best.  There are a few notes (follow the bouncing *’s to the bottom), so pay attention to those.  Other than that, I don’t think I have much to say.  We’re quickly approaching the climax, so yay for excitement!